Feedback
- 'You need an institutional logo - at least one at the start
- You need at least another 30 seconds of footage
- The notebook on the bench is not great
- Your titles are not in the correct order - look at your research for this
- The voice over is not good - there are gaps in it - will you add in non diegetic music?
- The Film Title font and lavishness is bad - does not fit in with the genre
- Some of the shots are out of focus and need to be filmed again
- The narrative doesn't make sense - does he love him? who is it? I thought it was meant to be a gangster film - it feels like a love story at the moment.'
~ Miss Peacock and Mr Bluck ~
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